Saturday 6 June 2009

1st Love (13)

3ogob el salfa elly sarat , 3arafni 3ala ekhta .. Maha ,, she was 24 .. metkharja min USA not married.. 7adha sweet and funny , open minded 3aks okhoha .. i talked to her cham mara laman ykon 3azeez ma3ay 3al kha6 .. then 3a6atni raqamha o khathat raqmi .. makent adeg 3aleha wayed ya3ny yemken bel shahar mara .. bas kan bena msgat forward.



October. Wensday , rad el bait around 10 .. o ga3adna nsoolef then he said



"Dalya, Mita nawya eta7ajebain?"



"mm .. madre laish sh6ari 3alek?"



"ya3ny shlon matadren nawya wela la2?"



"el7jab 7elow wel seter zain .. ana magdar a36ek wagt la2anna hatha el shay faj2a y9er!"



"wetha geltlich ta7ajebay 3ashani?"



"3azeez .. ana laman at7ajab bat7ajab 3ashan rabi mo 3ashan awadem!"



yatli fatra saratli mashakel ma3a ahali weseba el 7jab .. kanaw be7ajboni gha9eb! .. 7karooni o makanaw y3amloni 3adel ba3den malaw o galaw kaifha maradha beta7ajab ! so , hal mawtho3 wayed 7asas bel nesba le o ynarfezni!



"bas akhaf ahali mayerthon akheth wa7da momet7ajba"



"baih le hal daraja?"



"ee walla .. oboy dayen tadren .. o ahalna kelhum met7ajbat"



"aha .. le wagt`ha yser khair"



ghayarna el mawthoo3 o ga3adna ensoolif eb ashya2 thanya ..



"dalya .. ana wa3adtech ena sana thaltha ra7 akalem ahali .. o ana gad kelmete .. bas lazem akhalech bel 9oora .. awal fatra ra7 n9ek 3ala ro7na shway la2anna mokafa2at el koleya mo thak el zood.. o entay lel7en 6aleba "



"kel hatha mo mohim .. el mohem akon weyak!"



"adre daloy ena mayhemech bas lazem agoolich .. o ham awal fatra ra7 nasken bait ahale.. ra7 ykon 3endena ghorftain o 9ala o 7amam , ok?"



"ee wayed zain .. o bait 7amola awal fatra a7san .. man7ate 6ubakh o hal sowalef.."



"hehe .. A7EBECH DALOY .. walla mabe gherich"



"7ayaty enta wana amoot feekk"



after two weeks he said "dalya ana bakalem umi el yoom"

"ambaih sij ? way 7ade khayfa"

"la laish etkhafen .. umi tabe sa3adte .. ma3alech .. yalla akhales o abashrech"

"okaaay .. emwafaaaaag"

kint wayed mestansaaaaaaaa eb nafs el wagt kent khayfa.. madre eb tertha wela la2 ? .. etha galat la2 la2anha momt7ajba .. momken at7ajab bas wara shahar el 3asal .. wow i was soooooo excited .. ne6arta o ede 3ala galbi .. o kint ga3da eb dari a6ale3 el mobile an6era yren .. ooff twatarttt .. so 6ala3t barra ga3adt a7os bel 9ala .. kan oboy ga3ed weya okhoy le9gher

"hala bel ghalyaa"

"hala yuba hehe latesme3ek umi ba3den te7tar"

"laish te7tar ana 6ool 3omri agoolaha hal 7achi"

"..." i smiled .. umi o oboy kanaw y7ebon ba3ath ayam el jam3a .. o lel7een .. alla ytameem 3alehum o yarzegni 3azooz ya raab

"dalya ana o okhoch benro7 el cinema 10.30 taben tyeen ?"

"etha action mabi" mabi aroo7 o ana met2akda enhum emnagen action

"afa 3alech taben shay thani enghayer el film bas ta3alay ma3ana"

"YUBAA ANA GELT GABELHA" o mad el boz shebrain

"la baba 3ade ro7aw 3alekum bel 3afya ana male khelg aro7 el yoom"

"shofay el 3arth sari lee el sa3a 9.30 .. etha hawantay o qarartay tyeen 7ayach alla"

"oki baba thanks" o 3a6et okhoy khazat - yal na7es - la3ana 3ashan y2anba thamera!





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WARNING: al7en ra7 atkalam 3an mawtho3 7asas .. la7ad yez3al!___________________________________






re7t darii .. gelt bachayek 3ala e mailaty 3ala maydeg .. after chethy 2 hours or maby more .. he called

"HA SH9AAR??"

"hehe sorry daloy nesetech .. re7t el 9ala wela ekhty o nesebi ga3den .. ga3adt anaqez umi 3ashan tgoom mafhemat fa makalamt'ha o ga3adt ma3ahum o khathatna el sowalif"

"aha.." i was dissapointed .. bas shasawe .. yalla ma3aleh kel ta2khera feha khera..ga3adna nsolif then he asked

"dalya .. momkin so2al"

"hehehe akeeed momken mo bas so2al aas2eela .. gool sh3endek?"

"daloy enty jensetech ola wela thanya?"

"madre ? shelfarg?"

"farg!"

"mm .. walla ma adre shlon a3aref ?"

"se2lay ahalech"

"oki bas laish?"

"shofay a7na bel sher6a le baghena entezawaj lazem enyeb mowafaqa menhum"

"walain enkhale9 min el ahal eye el dawam!"

"la 3ade ohwa shay routiney .. bas ya3ny may9er nakheth mo kuwaiteyen"

"aha .. o bala wa7ed 7ab mo kuwaiteya?"

"maykhalona yakheth`ha .. asbab amneya"

"3ayal ashwa eni kuwaiteya hehehe"

"inzain yalla ro7ay shofay o golili"

"oboy ba3ad shwy o ebye6la3 ma3a okhoy o mama mo hni .. bacher as2alhum"

"oki mo tensain"

"enta sheno jensetek ?"

"ana ola 6ab3an"

"shlon 3araft?"

"ola ya3ni kuwaity bel ta2ses .. o thanya ya3ni emjansena 3ogob .. ro7ay ba6la3 jensetech telgen maktoob"

"inzain mageltle shyafreg ya3ny?"

"ya3ny ba3den le weldi bagha ydesh jaish wela sher6a lazem yes2elon mino 3amama .. mino khawalaa .. mino umma.. ya3ny etha jenseta thanya 9a3ba yenqebel"

"baaih hehehe o balla weldek mayabe ydesh 3askareya?"

"ee 3ad ba3den uhwa kaifa .. bas radan 3ala so2alich"


kan el mawtho3 yeded 3alay! .. awal mara asma3 chethy .. bas bas2al mom 3ashan yerta7 .. so thani yoom i asked her

"entay shlich eb hal sowalef?"

"sma3t banat ysolfon bel jam3a so gelt aby a3aref"

"shofay yuma.. entaw el mafroth mada ola bas yadech alla yhada masajal kel 3yala fa 9ar 7osa.. el kbar ola o el sghar thanya"

"o a7na min el kbar wela le9ghar?"

"entaw 3yali thanya"

"aha .. o entay?"

"ana ola" ana al7en ba3aref elnas yhemhum ola thanya malyon?

"o baba 3ood shlon retha takhthen oboy?"

"ana makhathet oboch bel sahel .. ga3adt ared leeen oboy retha wehwa magh9ob"

"emmm" ok .. E7BA6 , is it good? or ist bad? shbegol 3azeez! .. sekatna shway

"entay tawech sghera 3ala hal sowalef shlech eb hal as2ela o 3awar el ras.. kil el nas fehum el khair wel breeka aham shay el akhlaq"

wehya etelakam wesalni msg min 3azez


Ha sa2alteha?




"sa7 kalamich.. mama ana baroo7 adres"

"Magemtay tadresen ella laman we9alich msg ! ashof mino dazlich!"

"wee mesa7ta yuma hathy mayo 3endena presentation o lazem nkhal9aa"

"eeeeh .. ok!"


i went raketh to my room .. and i was metradeda madre agola wela ma agola ? akhaf thanya shay mozain ? walain shasaweeee .. oohh khal agola sheno ya3ny matwaqa3 uhwa 3on9ori le hal daraja ! so i called him

"HAAA daloooy"

"helloo"

"ha?"

"sa2altha tgol a7na mafroth ola bas min te3eyez yade serna thanya"

"Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm" i was like ?!?!?!?!?

"ya3ni entaw mo a9elen?"

"madre shlon a3aref?"

"ohoo entay shet3arfen!"

"ana shdarani ! ahali maytekalemon eb hal muwathe3 ! o masema3t hal kalam ela menek .. ENTA EB TAKHETHNI WELA EB TAKHETH JENSETI !! o ba3den el yahal ye6l3on 3ala obohum mo umhum" he really pissed me off !! eefff ynarfez

"hoob hooooob hadday dalooy ana shgelt"

"narfaztni tes2al as2ela madre shlon gayla!"

"asef mo qasde"

"its oki bas lat3edhaa"

"hehe 6a hathy thaded ba3ad"

"eee sh3abalek hehe .. so al7en 3endek kel el ajweba mita betkalemhum?"

"soon enshalla.. tara ana mesta3yel akthar menech .. lat7aten"


* gabel makent adre shelsalfa .. bas al7en ana met2akda ena kel hal as2ela min ahala .. madre min oma wela min oboh .. bas aked kan em7achehum o ohma kanaw yabon y3arfon hal swalef !









9 comments:

  1. fiirst again and again and again ;pP waaaaaaaw nice post ;*

    Nadoosh ;***

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  2. I love your story because in a way we all went through this at one point or another, I had this one relationship early on, that messed me up and the lies that we were fed at the time were just unbelievable I keep thinking how did I take that as the truth!

    I applaud your efforts at telling your story to the world and wish to read more :) Great Job!

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  3. i like the story but you probably shouldnt of talked about the 3aayla thing lana some people get offended... bas if its an essential part then you did well by leaving it
    bas walah great great story..

    -Nightmare

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  4. yalla meta nixt post 6awaltai :S

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  5. Nightmare . ofcourse i didnt mean to offend anyone .. as u can see am the one whos offended , sij hatha mawtho3 7asas bas ga3ed y9er bel dera o wayed fe nas yfakron hal tafker , o minhum my friends , ahali -my mothers side- o they talk about it jedami wala chenna hal shay ythayeg .. o etha thayagt a7ad sorry i didnt mean to.. o enshalla next post after 2 hours .. luv you all :*

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  6. I read your whole story I really like it but Azeez, ughh he really pisses me off, salfat il safra then the girl, and when he wasn't returning her phone calls she was so naive maskeena:s anyways i really like where this is going, keep it up;**

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  7. 3alla salfat el jnseeya ola aw thanya tara mat7ded law el ensan a9eel aw la2 :P bas b8ayt aw6'7 hal n86a :p

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